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I always wrote poems related to love but one fine day. I saw a play regarding gender disparity which gave rise to this poem. Hope you all will like it.

Why his words are treated as coming from a crown

And mine with an ugly frown

Why at every tough moment he gets your call

And I am deprived of it no matter how bad I fall

Why when he spends nobody comes to know

And when i do I become your foe

Why he so easily gets the required gadget

And in my case it's out of your budget

Why on his birthday loads of gifts galore

And on mine I get blessing and no more

Why did all the sacrifices I made

Feels as if hardly any difference did I make

Is that because you found me lying on the ground

Or you are ashamed to have me around

No matter how bad you treat

Shall never stop me from achieving my feat

So that my part of happiness comes towards me to embrace

And fulfills my desire to spit on your face

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	comment by abhishek (posted on 17 Nov 2010 14:47:19 IST)
	really nice and the last 4 lines were amazing!!!!!!

	comment by smart ragazza (posted on 17 Nov 2010 15:43:11 IST)
	good job......really awesome....................

	comment by An EMPty STREET .... (posted on 18 Nov 2010 14:00:24 IST)
	no offences intended ..but i found the last line destroyed the beauty of the .poem ...but rest ol are very good ..n ..really touchy poem....hats off to u sir ..!!

	comment by . (posted on 18 Nov 2010 17:44:45 IST)
	and why is it that there is less fess for girls and reservation?

	comment by SHAH PATEL (posted on 18 Nov 2010 19:35:39 IST)
	@shubh: gr8 job@shinchan: u hav promblem 4 reservation of girls but not for sc/st/obc, . tell me why; although i am a boy.

	comment by . (posted on 18 Nov 2010 21:23:03 IST)
	i have problem for all reservations shah patel

	comment by . (posted on 18 Nov 2010 21:24:33 IST)
	I wrote about girls because this article shows as if GIRLS ARE AS INNOCENT AS A BABY and AS OFF THE WHOLE WORLD IS AGAINST THEM

	comment by . (posted on 18 Nov 2010 21:25:41 IST)
	*as if

	comment by SHAH PATEL (posted on 18 Nov 2010 21:37:54 IST)
	@shinchan- chalo! atleast one is there in favour of removing reservation with me . and also shinchan was my favourite cartoon in childhood thanx for that but by the way whats ur real name.

	comment by . (posted on 19 Nov 2010 00:17:34 IST)
	hahha thats top secret :P

	comment by Rakhy (posted on 19 Nov 2010 16:08:59 IST)
	nice 1.....

	comment by $r!$]-[t! (posted on 19 Nov 2010 22:55:07 IST)
	aahaa....superb.....( though i too agree wid..keep it simple..!!)but on da whole the poem ws nice...gud ..!:-)

	comment by Geet (posted on 20 Nov 2010 11:38:29 IST)
	mmmmmmmmm.......nice one......as usual but.that last line ....(harsh one ).....but i kno abt whom u wrote this so..........chalta hai.....:):):)

	comment by compendium (posted on 20 Nov 2010 11:44:07 IST)
	really !a beautiful one....... n all wats written is quite true......................! :-)

	comment by Yagyadutt Mishra (posted on 20 Nov 2010 22:20:44 IST)
	No matter how bad you treat Shall never stop me from achieving my feat -----------------------------------------------------------Great thought